2015년 12월 5일 토요일

Essay #2


Eunkyeong Gong                                                                                            
Prof. Kyle Brebner
IERW (04)
4 December 2015


Approval essay about single-sex schools

             It is a fact that more and more single-sex schools are still produced, and every year they are producing hundreds of thousands of graduates. However, on one side, still many people are worrying that they have fewer opportunities to get along with different sex students. That is a good criticism but still there are many reports that graduates of all-girls schools typically have more leadership than those who graduated from schools of both sexes because most of all-girls schools including Sungshin, Ewha, and Sookmyung Woman’s University have a leadership program and the result was proven to be effective. Therefore, I totally agree with single-sex schools, especially all-girls schools for the following three reasons: leading girls to be more powerful women in the society, helping girls to concentrate more on their work, preventing possible sexual harassment.

             The first and the most important reason is that all-girls schools lead girls to be more active and have more leadership. For a long time, not only in South Korea, but also in other countries, usually it was men who become leader or boss of a group. For example, the head of the household was thought to be the father of the house, which is supposed to be a man. Of course, women have lost the opportunity to stand out in the society although they have enough abilities as men have. However, in all-girls schools, there is no male students and therefore female students can lead the class themselves. For example, Ewha Woman’s University is famous for its logo, “Ewha leadership” and in fact, many graduates of Ewha Woman’s University are working as a female leaders in the society.

             The next reason why single-sex schools are needed is that all-girls schools help girls to concentrate more on their studies than mixed-gender schools. For girls, adolescence is a period when they have growing interest in the opposite sex, boys, although they are not mature enough to have and continue a proper relationship with males. All-girls middle and high schools block boys from teenage girls’ sight, which helps them focus more on their studies than an interest in opposite-sex students. Many reports prove that girls of single-sex schools get better grades than girls of mixed-gender schools. For example, one report suggested that both all-boys schools and all-girls schools get a much higher academic achievement than mixed-gender schools in scholastic ability test, which is a SAT of Korea. See the picture below.
 


             The final reason is that all-girls schools protect girls from possible sex-bullying such as saucy jokes and sexual harassment. Not only girls, but also boys have a growing interest and demand for the opposite sex, girls. That’s a natural part of growing up, but unfortunately, some boys who did not receive proper sex education express their interest in girls in ways that are not so commendable; sexual harassments and jokes on female students. They might think it as playful, but it can possibly make a heartbreak and distorted thoughts that all men are preverts.

             To conclude, single-sex schools, especially all-girls schools have a good impact on girls for social, academic, and sexual ways. Therefore, I think more and more single-sex schools are needed. Also, to lessen the side-effect, less opportunity to get along with boys, I suggest that it would be better if schools provide programs with boys such as sports, discussions on weekends. Then, both boys and girls can get an opportunity to share their concerns and interests about their school life, for example and I think it is enough to get along with the opposite sex after graduation. In companies or communities, there is still an inequality between men and women which is so-called ‘glass ceiling’. However, I strongly claim that allowing students to enter single-sex schools will help both sexes to have a self-respect. How about seeing in the bright sides of all-girls schools and allowing our daughters to enter those schools?

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  1. Wow! It was really interesting topic and I enjoyed reading it :) I did not know the fact that all-girls school students are typically showing more leaderships than those from co-ed schools!! Moreover, I liked how you clearly stated thesis statement, three main topics and suppporting examples. Especially, i was really impressed at the chart you shown because providing the chart seemed to be worthy to understand and support this statement! Overall, it was very intersting and acceptable! However, I think one of the disadvantages of single-sex school is the prevention of adapting into society with opposite sex. TO be more specific, our society is compromised with men and women, but what is all-girls students don't know how to be along with men? Those girls will definetly being discriminated or have difficulties adapting into that mixed sex society compared to people who graduated from co-ed school... What do you think about this??

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    1. First of all, thank you for your comment and visiting my blog! I agree with your idea that graduates of single-sex schools, especially tha t of all-girls schools will have a bit more difficulties in adapting to mixed sex society. However, I think there are still a lot of good points of single-sex schools to say that it's a 'bad' one. And, at the final paragraph, I stated that we can lessen the disadvantage by making the opportunity to meet with boy students on weekends (e.g. sports, discussion, etc)! Did I give you enough answers? :) Thank you again for your precious feedback♡

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