Robot surgery is a critical innovation
because it can make less pain in patients. The Dr. Robot’s hand is known to be
just 5~7mm, which is far smaller and much more complicate than doctors’ hands. That
is, it can have a smaller damage on normal cells which do not need medical
touch, than the surgery by doctors’ hands. And it can lead to a less pain and
faster recovery than the original surgeries.
Second,
robot surgery is important because it has a low possibility of failure. Because
the surgeon can have a broader view of the patient’s body by 3D camera during
the surgery, there’s low possibility of causing a ‘fake’ cut on the patient’s
body. And of course, patient can have a quicker recovery from a possible pain
and danger.
The
robot surgery is a medical innovation in that it can have a less harm on the
normal body cells and that can lead to a low possibility of failure. There’s
much more good points in robot surgery. And therefore robot surgery market is
growing bigger and bigger although it causes more money as well. In research
conducted in 2015, the percentage of robot surgery in the whole surgery market
is over 11%. And, it will be growing much faster and bigger. I wish the ‘robot
surgery’ technique will grow more to meet the demands of patients.
In the first passage, I've situated the 'thesis statement' not in the last sentence of first paragraph. Because I wanted to have an immediate answer from my first sentence which questioned the readers !
답글삭제it is really interesting about 'robert surgery'
삭제i hope medical technology getting better so many people get healthy.'
I didn't know the robot surgery immediately was activated in Korea and I just think it is developing level. It is very helpful to develop medical technology with delicacy.
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